In the 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed nations.
In the years of 1800s, the era of industrialization, a large number of
people
migrate to developed countries
. Some people
argue that this
trend affected lifestyle and raised big problems in developing countries
. I strongly believe that this
trend would bring serious problems in developed countries
, such
as the increase in traffic
jams and pollution.
First
of all, the movement of people
to the developed countries
would stimulate the growth of the population. Therefore
, In destination countries
that have a huge population would experience problems in the traffic
system. It was because the growth of transportation facilities such
as road and rail systems have not ready yet to accommodate the movement of workers who need to commute to work every day. For an instance, in Jakarta, The capital city of Indonesia, the workers would experience a massive traffic
jam for commuting to work before the local government developed the Mass Rail Transport System (MRT).
On the other hand
, besides
the industrial activities that produced CO2 and NOx that decreased air quality, the movement of workers who commute to work every day also
tends to make it worse. A huge number of people
also
would produce a number of waste from daily consumptions and activities. For example
, the consumption of artificial products would increase the volume of chemical waste and plastics. Thus
, they tend to contaminate the water and sand.
To summarize, the migrations of people
due to the industrialization to the developed countries
would bring a major problem such
as massive traffic
jam in big cities and also
it could increase the amount of pollution in both air and land.Submitted by anwarachmad426 on
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