WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals, Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is no argument that there are a lot of environmental

problems

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

these days. One of the environmental issues is the extinction of various

creatures

that everyone should realize

this

Change the determiner

this problem

these problems

show examples

problems

firstly

. In fact, there are

also

other environmental

problems

,

in particular

, which is

effect

Add an article

an effect

the effect

show examples

from

Change preposition

by

show examples

humans

such

as deforestation.In

tge

Correct your spelling

the

following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached. It is true to explain that plants and

animals

in the world are important and related to the

environment

because if the world has

not

Correct your spelling

no

show examples

environment

Add an article

the environment

show examples

, the

creatures

will

be not exist

Change the verb form

not exist

show examples

and if there are

not

Correct your spelling

no

show examples

creatures

such

as plants or

animals

, the ecosystem in

environment

Add an article

the environment

show examples

cannot be balanced. In the other words, the

environment

and

creatures

are one. For

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

example,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

wild

animals

are in the forest and, the fish are in the water,

moreover

,

humans

need to take

advantag

Correct your spelling

advantage

advantages

of

creatures

and

environment

as consumptions, we need to angle for eating food.

However

, there

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

also

other important

problem

Fix the agreement mistake

problems

show examples

about

Change preposition

with

show examples

environment

Add an article

the environment

show examples

. I think it is probably a human-made

environment

problem

such

as the

problem

of toxic gas emitted from the

factorie

Correct your spelling

factories

factory

of the manufacturing industry.

This

problem

is very serious and

humans

should be careful because toxic gases can cause wide-ranging harm to the

environment

,

such

as

creatures

in water will die,

humans

' lungs will be destroyed, and there are more toxic wastes that can affect

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the world.

That is

global warming. In conclusion, the loss of particular species of plants and

animals

is the main environmental

problem

because the

creatures

and

environment

are one.

However

, the other

problems

are

also

important too.