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Some people believe that a college or a university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views, which view do you agree with? Explain why?

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Many of them opine that higher
education
 should be accessible to only successful
students
;
however
, there are numerous people thought that the
next
 level of
education
 should be available to all scholars. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain both views, later I will conclude that on which side I accepted along with the reasons.
Firstly
, if good
students
 only take admissions in the university,
then
 the results are beyond the expectations. Because pupils receive a high quality of
education
,
also
 teens can take part in the major fields and learn effectively.
Moreover
, a teacher allows
students
 to work on studies in detail on every subject. Due to high competition among peers, it teaches every individual to focus on research and their outcomes. Recently, I saw a survey in the newspaper, those who scored 80% and above in university, have been placed in many multi-national companies in a leadership role.
Also
, they are leading the organization across the world.
Secondly
, if everyone got an opportunity for higher
education
 leads to other social problems. A good tutee has few chances to participate in the classroom.
As a result
, they receive a poor
education
 and they do not achieve their future goals.
Moreover
, lack of attention from
tutor
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 results in the
students
 is not desirable. Teachers could not find the best talent among them.
For example
, a student is a good spokesperson, he is very creative in writing and delivering the speech, his hidden talent does not observe by a teacher because of the long strength in the classroom. To conclude, it’s my opinion that
education
 to only good
students
, will have a greater impact in the
education
 field as well as in the society, outcomes are great only to that university who are in
this
 practice.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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