Some people believe that a college or a university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views, which view do you agree with? Explain why?

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Many of them opine that higher

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should be accessible to only successful

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, there are numerous people thought that the

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level of

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should be available to all scholars. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain both views, later I will conclude that on which side I accepted along with the reasons.

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, if good

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only take admissions in the university,

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the results are beyond the expectations. Because pupils receive a high quality of

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teens can take part in the major fields and learn effectively.

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, a teacher allows

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to work on studies in detail on every subject. Due to high competition among peers, it teaches every individual to focus on research and their outcomes. Recently, I saw a survey in the newspaper, those who scored 80% and above in university, have been placed in many multi-national companies in a leadership role.

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, they are leading the organization across the world.

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, if everyone got an opportunity for higher

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leads to other social problems. A good tutee has few chances to participate in the classroom.

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, they receive a poor

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and they do not achieve their future goals.

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, lack of attention from

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results in the

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is not desirable. Teachers could not find the best talent among them.

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, a student is a good spokesperson, he is very creative in writing and delivering the speech, his hidden talent does not observe by a teacher because of the long strength in the classroom. To conclude, it’s my opinion that

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to only good

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, will have a greater impact in the

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field as well as in the society, outcomes are great only to that university who are in

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

295 words

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Some people believe that a college or a university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views, which view do you agree with? Explain why?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Why do celebrities earn more money than politicians? Is it a positive or negative development?

You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter: give details of the celebration explain the reason why you need time off suggest a way to have your work done during that time.

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.