Write about the following topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world, undeveloped

countries

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usually been given support by wealthy nations through funds,

although

it is argued that

this

does not tackle poverty and rich governments should look for other methods to help poorer ones. In my opinion,

this

statement has my agreement as just giving

money

alone can not solve the roots of

unwealthiness

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unhealthiness

. As a matter of fact, poverty is not only lay on not having enough

money

, it causes by not having good authority

also

. Because of that, poor

countries

often have a bad education system or medical services due to the fact that the local governments are corrupted or spending

money

on unnecessary things.

Consequently

, there are fewer and fewer intelligent and talented citizens inhabit there because of the low living standard, and the problems would still be unsolved by them. Take Viet Nam

for example

, a poor country whose corruption is nothing new to indigenous people, and many choose to study or work abroad to find another place to live in.

That is

why only

money

can not tackle the main problem completely.

On the other hand

, there are apparently a few ways that developed nations can help rather than just financial aid.

First

of all, they can prioritize the inhabitants that are in bad situations by giving them the supplies and services needed

such

as accommodation or medical attention.

Additionally

, wealthy

countries

can offer them foreign affairs to help their economy grow or help them find a way to fight corruption and other issues that are existing in the region.

For instance

, Viet Nam has been supported by many lands by given numerous contracts and agreements, turning Viet Nam from an undeveloped nation into one of the fastest developing

countries

on the globe. To conclude, it is no doubt that there are many methods that rich nations can give to poorer

countries

and financial aid is not one of them because it does not solve the root of the problem.