Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since people are

riased

Correct your spelling

raised

in various characteristics of sociality, there are

numourously

Correct your spelling

numerously

alternative choices to encourage better

behavior

Change the spelling

behaviour

show examples

of kids, but some teaching methods might especially cause bad effects

intead

Correct your spelling

instead

. In

this

essay, the

arguement

Correct your spelling

argument

will discuss contradictory sides of punishment and

rewarding

Change the form of the verb

reward

show examples

which are popular choices of teaching to

chidren

Correct your spelling

children

. On the one hand, when kids illustrate worse habits, it seems reasonable that their

parent

Fix the agreement mistake

parents

show examples

will punish them to motivate

children

Change noun form

children's

show examples

behavior

Change the spelling

behaviour

show examples

.

For example

,

mother

Correct article usage

the mother

show examples

expects to hit her son because she

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

informed

from

Change preposition

by

show examples

the school that he bullied his classmate. She particularly aims to let her child

to

Change the verb form

apply

show examples

realise and avoid his negative personality. Perhaps he consider

to emphasize

Change the verb form

emphasizing

show examples

and eventually

memorise

Wrong verb form

memorising

show examples

that he must not

offensivelt

Correct your spelling

offensively

offensive

harms

anyone

Add the comma(s)

, anyone,

show examples

again.

However

, even if

children

are extremely admonished, rejection would appear from

thier

Correct your spelling

their

mind and

finally

change them to be more bullish and radical.

On the other hand

, admiration and giving rewards to

children

who have excellent

behavior

Change the spelling

behaviour

show examples

are less aggressive. They will specially recognize and

consitently

Correct your spelling

consistently

maintain

their

Replace the word

they're

they are

show examples

well

Change the adverb

good

show examples

habits.

Example

Add an article

An example

The example

show examples

can be seen in youngsters who always perform as good

child

Fix the agreement mistake

children

show examples

along

Change preposition

throughout

show examples

the year because they desire

receiving

Change the verb form

to receive

show examples

presents

in

Change preposition

at

show examples

Christmas. So,

this

path tends to be

appropriate

Add an article

an appropriate

show examples

goal for

children

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

each year and

hence

contributes a suitable character for them.

In addition

, excessively frequent rewarding them might

be

Correct your spelling

because

show examples

cause

Add an article

the cause

a cause

show examples

of

wrong

Change the article

the wrong

show examples

anticipation from

children

becuase

Correct your spelling

because

they will consider the prize before

accept

Change the verb form

accepting

show examples

every

requests

Change to a singular noun

request

show examples

. While it may be correct that the results of

extremely

Replace the word

extreme

show examples

punishment and rewarding

truely

Correct your spelling

truly

seem to be opposite side to promote kind

children

. It still appears to be the case that proper mixing both ways is the prime conclusion of

this

conflict.