wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a vital role in our ecosystem.

However

, in the present, it is argued that they do not belong in our advanced world and protecting them is just a wastage of funds. I firmly disagree with the above statement and will explain why we should make an effort to protect them.

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of all, saving

animals

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not a waste of funds. These creatures are important to keep the balance in our ecosystem, from the biggest to the smallest ones they have their role to

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.

For example

, the bears are responsible for dispersing seeds of berries and other fruits they consume

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a daily basis, which aid in generating more fruit-bearing plants in the forest. If they will cease to exist,

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of trees and plants will significantly decline and will cause a negative outcome to humans, resulting

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food resources.

Thus

, we should not discard them.

Second

, protecting

animals

is our sole responsibility. No one else would have the ability to do so and we should act before

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too late. As we know, some of them are already extinct

such

as the woolly mammoth, which is believed to be

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related to a modern-day elephant. If we fail to save them, the future generation will only be seeing these

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of

animals

through books and videos. Not only that, their loss will abrupt the natural flow of

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community of interacting organisms and their environment.

That is

why we should be aware of our role to save them. In conclusion, despite the argument that saving

animals

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just a waste of tax money, I firmly believe that it is not true because

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to do so will lead to

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food resources. We should

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advocate for their lives. By doing so, we are fulfilling our part to keep the balance in our environment.