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As Earth runs out of natural resources, we have to started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is wrong thing to do, and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth. To what extent to do you agree with them? What alternative might there be to exploiting space for natural resources?

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As the population on
earth
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 is increasing at a significant rate than previously, the natural
resources
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 are rapidly depleting. Some critics argue that looking for
solutions
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 in
space
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 is wrong while others claim that
alternative
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solutions
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 must be found on
Earth
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.
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 there are other methods of searching for
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resources
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, I strongly disagree that
solutions
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 must be found on
Earth
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.
First
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 and foremost, our ancestors have been travelling across the ocean to find landscapes to conquer for new
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.
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 is because of the basic instincts of human beings which are "The strongest survives".Above all else, when the natural
resources
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 on
Earth
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 deplete and there are no other means of obtaining them, humans must travel to
space
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 in order to survive.
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, the Britains have travelled to Australia looking for new
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 and ended up colonizing the aboriginals.
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, looking to
space
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 for
solutions
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 to natural
resources
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 is inevitable.
On the other hand
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, there are
alternative
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 methods already available that could potentially allow the human race to survive in the future without having to look to
space
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. The reasons are quite simple, many countries across the globe are now switching to energy
solutions
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 that are produced naturally.
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, many households are now switching to solar panels to generate electricity which is beneficial for the planet's well-being.
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, there are
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solutions
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 that already exist here on
Earth
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. In conclusion, with the aforementioned arguments and suggestions,
alternative
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solutions
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 can be found on
Earth
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.
Nevertheless
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, I strongly disagree that
alternative
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 methods should be looked for on
Earth
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 because when there are no more natural
resources
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 available, the only option will be in
space
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.
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