You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you regarding the three-month course offered by your school. If it is not too inconvenient, I would like to ask for a few additional information about the school and the accommodation as well.

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the advertisement, your establishment is in London but it does not show the location.Is it central to the city? I hope it is, so I can walk to get to know the city attractions more during my free time. Another thing I am concerned about is the accommodation. I would prefer a roommate to practise the language more during the day hours unless he keeps unusual sleeping hours

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I would definitely go with the other option to have a private room. The

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point to mention is that I have an allergy to spice,

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if the chef can make me a special meal

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I will pay for the school meals. waiting to hear from you at your earliest convenience. Best regards, Anne.Leo

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task achievement

You could mention any specific courses or aspects of the program you are interested in to make your request for information more detailed.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence to guide the reader through your requests more smoothly.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are very polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

task achievement

The tone of the writing is polite and suitable for a formal letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

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