it's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

In
this
contemporary day and
age
,talent can be gained through hard
work
or it can be in your genes.people who are born with certain talents can be recognized from an early
age
and for ,others it took time to become professional in certain things.In my opinion,I think whether a person is gifted or not he/she can attain perfection in any field through working hard for it.I will expound on both viewpoints in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,people do bear
with
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special abilities and they are better than the normal person it started reflected at an early
age
.
For instance
,it can be seen in the school that many children are able to grasp the information or a particular lesson faster than other pupils.
Moreover
,many are able to already know how to play the guitar or have learned the violin at a very young
age
which took a lot of time for an ordinary person to learn and some sportsperson are
also
better in the sports at a very young
age
than the other players due to which we often call
then
god gifted.
Secondly
,it is possible to learn and gain skills through hard
work
and it has been seen in many athletes and musicians.
For example
,many
work
hard day and night to attain a certain position in any field but fail to do so,but some get them easily and some have to do more hard
work
for it.
Furthermore
,nothing is impossible in life it can be achieved through hard
work
because not only birds with wings are able to fly but humans too with their great dedication achieve
this
milestone . In conclusion,it is not arduous for anyone to reach the same level as the gifted once,but certain talented societies still have certain benefits which they get as a gift or inherited.
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