People should look after their health because this is a duty to the society not just a personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some think that
people
should take care of their health
as it is not only a duty to the community but also
personal benefit. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with their idea. In this
essay, I will point out some of my idea and reasons for my agreement.
First
of all, health
is the most important thing that everyone should take care of. It is undeniable fact that a healthy person is a joyful person. In addition
, healthy people
make society better. For example
, an unhealthy person may release the virus and bacteria to the environment through coughing.
On the one hand, health
can bring a lot of personal's advantages. The first
merit that can be brought is real happiness. This
is because healthy people
can do everything that makes them happy. They can work harder and make more money rather than unhealthy people
. Unhealthy people
could not happy as much as normal people
. Especially people
who suffer from serious diseases are more likely to feel depressed and stressed . They have to take a lot of medicine and avoid their favourite foods. Nevertheless
, healthy people
can eat every food they want without worrying health
problems. Change preposition
about health
Besides
, people
who always take care of their health
looks very young and active. What is more, being healthy can have better opportunities in education and work since they can put more effort into
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in to
get
their achievement. There is no doubt that being unhealthy may delay Change the verb form
getting
people
's dreams.
Being healthy is a natural gift from god. Several steps must be done to have a healthy lifestyle such
as having enough sleep time, avoiding having junk foods and eating nutritious meals. Most importantly, doing exercise every day because exercise can improve stamina.
To sum up, health
is the key to every success and it can make the world more peaceful, fresh and happy.Submitted by tthoon21 on
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