A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He or she has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this Summer

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I hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and good spirit. I am writing
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letter to tell you about
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summer trip which you have planned. Well as you have planned to go to Naran. I am sure
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vacation will be your best and most memorable vacation. It is a very quiet and calm place with less traffic and pollution and you always like to visit
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places. The environment is clean and clear with a fresh and cool breeze blowing for 24hrs which gives a good and relaxed feeling. You can
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go hiking which is very healthy and entertaining equally.
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, there are many activities for you to enjoy
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as jet skiing, rafting etc.
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, you may face problems with your net connection as it is a hilly area and signals are not good;
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, it may not be possible for you to contact your family friends.
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, hotels are expensive and they charge a big amount for staying. It has been a long time I have not travelled with my friends and I think it is a good chance to avail. When is your plan to leave? I will do my packing and will arrange some money as well. We will enjoy it a lot
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time. See you soon. Lots of love, Sana
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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