More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The development of

technological

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the technological

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area is getting bigger and bigger until it becomes an essential skill to learn.

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, more and more parents let their kids

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use electronic devices

such

as

computers

and tablets because they believe that it will be a big help in studying these new skills. In

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essay, both merits and demerits will be mentioned.

To begin

with the bright side of playing

computers

or mobile phones , it can improve the communication of young people. They can make friends with strangers all over the world despite the time and location.

In addition

, they can have a good impact when they see hardworking people on social media. Most importantly, it is undeniable fact that most of the

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,

presentation

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work's

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project

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are based on

computers

.What is more, new materials which are useful for daily life are

also

created with modern techniques.

Besides

, some

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that technician is paid more salary rather than normal workers.

Next

,

children

can find uncountable sources and

informations

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information

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very quickly and easily by pressing one click.

On the other hand

, spending times on laptops and tablets have

also

negative

consquences

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consequences

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for

children

.

First

and foremost, it can be

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great damage

for

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your health. There are thousands of youths who have to wear glasses because they

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loose

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lose

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the energy of

eyes

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their eyes

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. Brain cancer is

also

the

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popular health

problems

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which

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can be caused by using phones.

In addition

, when the

children

play

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computer, most of them are using social media

such

as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter

instead

of learning technical methods. To sum up, it is very important to use the

computers

and tablets correctly so that the

children

can have many benefits which are very important in their life.

Then

, I believe that there are more pros rather than cons.