People should look after their health because this is a duty to the society not just a personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different opinions over whether an individual's

health

is a

government

's responsibility or not. Some believe that it is personal duty. Regarding

this

, I strongly agree with

this

assertion. There are certain reasons.

Firstly

, as each person can have an informed choice,

health

is an individual's duty.

Although

the

government

supports people, some

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keep making

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wrong

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irresponsibly. In

this

regard, helping these individuals is a waste of taxes.

For instance

, recent media reports that almost 10% of drug abusers spend pension which is provided by the

government

on drugs again.

Hence

, the members of the public should manage their

health

by themselves.

Secondly

, it is generally acknowledged

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the

government

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responsibility

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dweller's

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health

, it should provide free

health

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. What is more, it disturbs

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efficient care since an emergency patient might face

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delay

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treatment. As it is free, citizens who

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a light symptom tend to go to a hospital to check it frequently.

For example

, a survey conducted by the Korea Healthcare Foundation has revealed that 30% of Koreans oppose

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free healthcare service as they

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urgent treatment should line in for a long time due to people who

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light illnesses.

Therefore

, it is reasonable to point out that the

government

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health

. In conclusion, there is no doubt to point out that an individual should manage his

health

responsibly.

However

, I

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recommend

that only the poor who has

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financial difficulty and a serious disease is supported by a

government

not everyone.