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Does the educational success of a student depend on the teacher or the attitude of the student? Discuss both sides and give an opinion.

#success #student #teacher #attitude
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Nowadays
teachers
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 had become to be the main pillar for a
child
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's academics. The academic excellent outcomes for a
child
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 is according to the
teacher
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 and or the schooler's behaviour. In the following ,essay I am going to talk about the
teacher
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's side as well as the
child
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's side as well as my own point of view.
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, the student,s success is mainly based on the
teacher
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. For ,instance a good
teacher
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 meaning the one who is adept in his profession is likely to give
students
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 vital academic knowledge
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, attracting good
results
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 for the
child
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.
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 it means
teachers
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 contribute to a
child
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's success academically. In opposite to what I said above, the
students
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 are
also
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 responsible for their excellent or failer in their studies.
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, if a
child
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 misbehaves at
school
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 in
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 a way that you could find him or her getting involved in drugs consumption while at
school
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 it is likely to affect their academic
results
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 negatively.
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, if the
child
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 is a mischievous person it again affects his or her
results
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 in a negative way as well. Likely, when I was in high
school
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 there were
students
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 who were well known for not obeying their
teachers
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 and they usually go against the
school
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 rules and got punished most of the time but in the
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end they failed their final year exams.
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 means children's
results
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 are likely affected by being drug dealers and being mischievous. In conclusion, the schoolers' success relies upon their
teachers
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 as well as the
students
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 themselves. Despite all that, in my own ,perception the children's academic outcomes mainly come out of their behaviour.
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