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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#world’s #cost #fuel #cars #vehicles
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In modern days
increase
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 in automobiles and ,technology causes the rise of
pollution
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 and toxic
air
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Pollution
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 affects the earth and causes global warming .I agree with the solution the best way
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solve the earth's environmental issues is to
increase
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 the cost of
fuel
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 for cars and other automobiles. In ,addition an
increase
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 in the productivity of Electric
vehicles
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 is the best way to stop global warming
also
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 some other ways to reduce
this
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 problem.
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 and foremost nowadays most
people
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 have cars and own
vehicles
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 it is good to hike the prices of petrol and diesel so that
people
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 can use public transport
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 of own
vehicles
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.For ,instance if the
government
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increase
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 the price of fuels so
people
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 can use public transport and it leads to a
decrease
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 in
air
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pollution
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 in the
air
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.In ,Delhi the
government
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 come up with the solution on the weekend
people
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 can use only public transport
instead
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 of their own
vehicles
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. So that the usage of vehicle
decrease
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 on particular days these results to
decrease
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 the
air
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pollution
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 .
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the
government
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 and the automobile industry is expanding the productivity of Electric
vehicles
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 so that the consumption of gas is decreased .For ,instance if the prices of
fuel
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 hike
people
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 can look for alternative usage so that if the productivity of EV increases and the cost may be affordable the public can buy electric
vehicles
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 .It results in an
increase
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 in EVs and a decline in
fuel
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vehicles
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. In conclusion,the
increase
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 in the price of fuels is resulting from the
decrease
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 in global warming and
however
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, the
government
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 can take some steps to
decrease
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 global warming like planting trees which lead to a
decrease
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 in heat in the environment and
therefore
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 they can take C02 and give good
air
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.So that not only increases the
fuel
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 some measures have to take to improve the earth's atmosphere.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • excessive use
  • encouraging public transportation
  • sustainable energy sources
  • hydrogen-powered vehicles
  • generate additional revenue
  • environmentally friendly projects
  • disproportionately affects
  • lower-income individuals
  • accessible public transportation options
  • sudden hikes
  • inflation
  • social inequality
  • renewable energy
  • promoting carpooling
  • equitable
  • addressing environmental issues
  • punitive measures
  • sustainable lifestyle
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