Children are now watching more television than they have ever done before. What are the possible risks and the benefits of this?

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television is playing an increasingly important role in entertaining humans in all age

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and children not only are not exceptional but

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are the largest audiences. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that

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young generation has its own two sides. The following essay will overlook some of these advantages and disadvantages. On

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hand, a great number of benefits are being discussed for

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habit by experts.

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educational programs has been increased by televisions.

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cartoons have been viewed as an enjoyable means of learning

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youngsters.

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, the level of society's education can be increased with more considerable speed in compared to past.

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of watching TV is for parents to have

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to do their chores. To

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, the

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a child is watching an educational program is a valuable

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for a mother to do the postponed responsibilities or even rest.

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, the other family members

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can benefit from children's entertainment by the television.

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the above-said benefits are not deniable, it has brought a lot of problems.

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of the most obvious

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is its subsequent sedentary lifestyle.

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that used to be dedicated

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playing with peers on the streets is being substituted by sitting

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in front

of a screen for hours.

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, the

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generation is at

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risk of inactivity and its

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consequences

like obesity.

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programs are not suitable for children. Though the hours that offspring watching the televisions can be supervised, it needs a

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and efforts of their parents which are not

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for them. To sum up, watching TV as a new habit of the young generation has its advantages and disadvantages. The provided educational opportunities and the free

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it can bring for parents are located against the propagation of the sedentary lifestyle and the danger of watching

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inappropriate programs. I believe with good supervision the benefits overweight its drawbacks.