Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often thought by some
people
that in order to stay updated for knowing about the current events in the country,
newspapers
are the optimal medium.
On the contrary
,
other
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side of
society
believe
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that
news
from mediums like social
media
,
radio
or
television
is better. While traditional
media
has its own benefits, I would argue that information from other
media
is more significant. There are numerous merits of reading using the newspaper for everyday
news
. The
first
and foremost is that as it comes from a number of verified sources, it is one of the most effective ways of authentic
news
;
on the other hand
,
news
from social
media
can be fake
some times
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, resulting in chaos in
the
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society
.
Moreover
, most of the
news
printed
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these
newspapers
are always in so much detail, which can dwindle the chances of any ambiguity, whereas
radio
or
television
shows generally
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telecasted
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specific times,
and
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giving
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amount of information in
such
a short time can be arduous sometimes. Take
for example
of
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‘Pandora Papers’ where the international group of journalists work collaboratively from all across the globe and investigated the case by verifying it genuinely to unmask the hidden owners of secret bank
account
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accounts
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, apartments, private jets to expose them worldwide.
However
, is the are
these
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news
from
newspapers
have more benefits overall than other
news
resources? Certainly not, as the other
news
outlets
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they have
certain
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edge over
old
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way of
media
because of the advancement in technology, like
news
from social
media
like Facebook or Instagram is free of cost, and it can reach millions of
people
conveniently and very quickly;
consequently
, it can have more effect on
the
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society
than the others .
Additionally
, it is reachable to
people
from all age groups through
radio
or
television
, while
newspapers
are mostly used by our parents' generation only, which means the availability of
news
from
such
forums is comparatively more rapid and easy to get.
For instance
, as per an article in -'The Times'- 80% of
the
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India's young population prefer to watch
news
through
online
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medium
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rather than the
newspapers
. To recapitulate,
although
traditional
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way of
media
is preferred by a huge number of
people
from the
society
,
news
from social
media
,
radio
or
television
is much more effective owing to its easy reach.
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