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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is argued that migrating to a foreign
language
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 may lead to potential problems in terms of social as well as practical. Learning
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language
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a language
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 is a vital procedure to easily adapt
in
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 the place that the person is going to permanently stay.
This
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 essay agrees that it may cause serious problems because the person without background knowledge of the
language
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 can lead
him
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to conflict and
problem
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problems
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to understand
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 a simple manual instruction. There are various ways to learn the
language
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 in the nation that people is going to migrate
.
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 Several people without any idea in
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language
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a language
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they
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tend to go, causing them having difficulty to understand can lead to various adverse
ramification
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.
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, coming to
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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 country should have a small background of the
language
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. A friend of mine is a prime example, he went to a country where he only knows one word, during his work there is
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 fight that leads him to jail.
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, there can
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a
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possibility of
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 to understand a simple task.
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, while performing the job, having
a
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tiny learning about the simple manual instruction
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for
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 example, can
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effect
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to
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trouble. At least, if the person learned the basic
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 used there will be an understanding in both
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. For
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, in work, you cannot work properly without any idea about the
language
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 they are talking about. In conclusion, I agree that living in a foreign
language
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 country without basic knowledge can cause serious trouble because it may lead to miss understanding and potential having
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.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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