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Some people think that robots are impotant for human's development. Other's think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been tremendous growth in artificial intelligence , one of the most important inventions of AI is
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. There are many people who believe that
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 are crucial for society’s development whereas some hold a contrasting view. I personally believe that robotics is a positive development for humans.
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 , Automated machines can produce significantly more amount of
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 than humans as they don't have any emotions .They do not get tired and can
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 continuously for hours with more accuracy.
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,
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 can
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 in places that are dangerous for human health and life.
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, humans can be replaced with
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 in factories that involves radioactive elements or chemicals like sulphur, carbon monoxide or chlorine which have many hazardous effects on human fitness.
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, they save a lot of time, reduce human mistakes because they
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 on a certain set of algorithms and help in predicting forecasts based on history. Weather forecasting is the best example of future prediction.
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, Some people still hold different points of view. They feel
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 can cause more harm than help .
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, the latest driverless metro incident results in loss of life and property both. The reason for
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 accident was it was set for public use without proper testing.
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, unemployment could increase because people will be replaced by machines. In conclusion , I would say that every technology has its own merits and demits, but in my ,belief the invention of
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 has more advantages than disadvantages for society, provided they are used with proper algorithms and testing.

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