Every year your company organize a sports event for a local community but this year they can’t do it. Write a letter to your local newspaper about this. In your letter : Express your feelings about missing the sports event. : Tell them about your plan for next year. : Explain how this sports event is useful.

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter with a remorse feeling that our company the Greenways Limited will not be hosting

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year's annual sports event.

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Sunday, the director of our company used to handle all the team's finances and was responsible for organizing programmes including the community sports event.

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year, at the time of gaming day, the director's cremation ceremony will be held

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which it will be difficult to aid for the event.

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, next year the new director will be taking care of all these responsibilities.

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, the association has decided to sponsor the apparel and equipment for the games. Not only

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, the winner will be awarded a scholarship and free admission to a sports academy which would be very useful for the individual.

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, in future, our group will be charging entry tickets from the spectators and the money later could be used for the welfare of the community.

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, making

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program beneficial for society. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Jasmeen

vishallyvishally98Sat May 17 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea. Group similar ideas together to improve flow.

task achievement

Add a more formal greeting and closing statement to enhance formality.

task achievement

You expressed your feelings strongly about the event being missed.

task achievement

You provided a clear plan for next year's event.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

cancellation
disappointment
community engagement
physical activity
fostering
collaboration
local talent
platform
improvements
enjoyable experience
promoting health
collective spirit
next year’s event
anticipation
support

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