Migration is growing rapidly all over the world.Explain problems and solution of migration.

In 2019, a report was published on the website
worldmigrationreport
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then
, to understand the
reasons
for the
unusual
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high number,
people
have been trying to understand the
reasons
behind immigration. Some possible
reasons
are political, like war or
government
persecution, environmental
such
as extreme weather, or economic ones. The most direct
reasons
for migration are
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political ones. One of the major factors is war, and the conflicts and
government
persecutions caused by it. During armed conflicts, many
people
with different ethnicity, religion, or
politic
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orientations can be purged by the
government
. Many of them choose to abandon their homes and flee to other
countries
. These kinds of
people
are called humanitarian refugees and their decision of migration was not made out of their own will but forced by political conflicts.
For example
, in 2019,
people
from Syria had been fleeing to Europe in large numbers due to the wars and persecutions.
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second
place after political
reasons
were the environmental
reasons
.
For example
,
people
flee from natural disasters or extreme weather events
such
as floods, earthquakes, or droughts. In turn, those
people
are called environmental migrants and they are forced to leave their
home
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homes
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because some sudden and dangerous changes in the environment have
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their lives or working conditions severely. The group of
people
that suffered the most under these changes are farmers in developing
countries
like India, where they made up the majority of the population
Last
but not least,
people
migrate for economic
reasons
. These
people
migrate from
countries
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country
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to
countries
are hoping to find a place with a better outlook to search
jobs
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, but
also
often a place with higher
labor
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standards and wages compared to their homelands.
For example
,
people
from developing
countries
would often migrate to other
countries
where the market for
works
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work
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is better. But compare to other immigrants, those
people
are often individuals, rather than
in
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families. To conclude,
although
the
reasons
for
migration
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the migration
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might vary from
individuals
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to
individuals
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, none of the
people
are
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doing
this
willingly as they are often forced to do so. By understanding the
reasons
of
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migrations, the
government
can do more to support the
immigrates
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and collaborate with
countries
around the world to find solutions for their problems.
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