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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, large numbers of online
courses
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 are available in many universities. It is often discussed as a controversial issue whether there are more benefits or more drawbacks to distance learning. From my point of view, I believe there are more disadvantages than advantages. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both views in detail. On the one hand, students can get large numbers of benefits by taking e-learning studies.
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, streaming web-based
courses
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 provides significant convenience for students. Since they do not need to be physically in
schools
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, they can save
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time
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 and money. To give a clear example, a student does not have to pay for the transportation systems to attend the school which saves their transportation fees and commuting
time
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.
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, it gives learners immediate access to the faculties. Learners can instantly reach out to the professors with questions and view
class
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 documents on the internet.
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, if there is something they do not understand in the field of their study, they are able to ask through the internet which is difficult for students who attend in-person classes because they typically need to wait until the scheduled
class
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time
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 to meet a professor or peers.
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, there are some problems that emerge
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 positive aspects.
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 with, there is no physical contact with classmates, and
as a consequence
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, that may lead to miscommunication or isolation.
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, some research shows that 70% of pupils who take online
courses
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 find it more difficult to communicate with peers and find it hard to do some projects as a team. On top of that, they are more likely to encounter technical issues during
class
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.
Due to
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 the large
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 of people attending the same platform at the same
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, problems with network connections or servers may arise. From my experience, I had difficulties with network connections when I took a distance
class
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. There was a delay between the sound and the visual.
To conclude
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,
although
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 there are some advantages to online
courses
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such
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 as convenience and immediate access to the faculties, there are
less
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 in-person
interaction
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 and technical issues as well. I personally believe the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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Task Achievement
In your introduction, make sure to clearly state your position on whether the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages. Also, ensure to address all parts of the essay prompt in your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on strengthening the connection between your ideas and ensuring a smoother flow between paragraphs. Use transition words effectively to link your arguments together and improve the overall coherence of the essay.
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