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doctors recommend older people for exercise regularly. however, some people do not excersie. what are the causes?

#doctors #people #exercise #excersie
Healthcare is obviously the vital thing to do
atleast
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at least
 for ourselves. Some old aged people believed that worshipping lord and taking rest is good to be
instead
 of doing exercises.There are many causes behind
this
 which highlight the points in
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 essay.
Firstly
, The adults are already old aged and suffer from many ailments. In their body due to lack of energy, they cannot be able for higher movement.
Also
then
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 get tired very soon by doing even
a
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little things.
Moreover
, They assume that their death is
also
 nearby so why
to
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do health care.
Secondly
, The Health problems
such
 as high or low blood pressure or weakness of body and heart attack problems they get medicine with
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 dose which make them just feel alive and live more .
Doctor
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 suggests
to do
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workout
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 for few times a day but due to
weakness
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 older people prefer to avoid that things. In the conclusion, the thought of older people on
warm up
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 for body is taken in
very
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a very
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 lazy way so they avoid
such
 things.
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