Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Nowadays, due to the rapid increase in
population
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the
government
is investing
lot
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of money in railways than
roadways
. I believe constructing more
railway
lines will help many
people
to transit in
easiest
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mean
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without any hassle. So I completely agree with the statement.
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Firstly
, the railways are always the cheapest mode of transport
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to others like airways and
roadways
. Because of one train on
track
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many
people
will get benefited along with the
government
.
In addition
, trains can carry many
people
with
enormous
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amount of space in it without any congestion like in the bus.
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, trains can pull massive loads which makes
government
profitable and cheapest ways of transport makes
people
satisfied.
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makes
lot
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of
people
make use of the line organized by the
government
.
Secondly
, trains will always arrive on time.
Railway
system
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will not face traffic
problem
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problems
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like
roadways
. By commuting on
train
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the train
a train
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can avoid from getting delayed. But in
roadways
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the traffic of the road cannot be predicted. Which makes
people
to
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calculate upon their arrival at
destination
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point.
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can be informed to the relation to
pick
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them up from the
railway
station.
For instance
,
railway
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the railway
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department would announce the timings of arrivals and departure which will be accurate and reliable to the general public. To conclude, always
railway
system
have
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huge plus points comparing to the
roadways
so, I would say that always
government
should consider spending its money
such
profitable plans.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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