your friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend write a letter to him/her and say agree to this arrangement say what time is suitable for you. Describe what are you planning to do.

Dear Maggie, I am writing
to let you know, that I am so glad about your daughter's visit to my home
coming weekend. In fact, I am so excited and already have certain plans in my mind. Because of my night shift on Friday, I will be at the office till 10 AM on Saturday morning. Rather than you dropping her I will pick her up from my way
returning back home.
, it will save
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time in commuting. I have planned all the weekend activities which not only include picnics but
shopping. I assure you, your daughter will not feel alone a my home.
, I have my niece here, they both will be mixed up with each other and play together. In case there is any change in plan please let me know. Best regards Navdeep
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear main idea; the third paragraph could be more focused on a single aspect of the plans.
task achievement
Complete all aspects of the task; expand slightly on the timing that suits you besides mentioning the pickup time, for clarity.
lexical resource
Use a wide range of vocabulary to convey precise meanings and avoid repetition of words and phrases
grammatical range
Utilize a variety of complex sentence structures to demonstrate language flexibility and accuracy.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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