your friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend write a letter to him/her and say agree to this arrangement say what time is suitable for you. Describe what are you planning to do.

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Dear Maggie, I am writing

this

to let you know, that I am so glad about your daughter's visit to my home

this

coming weekend. In fact, I am so excited and already have certain plans in my mind. Because of my night shift on Friday, I will be at the office till 10 AM on Saturday morning. Rather than you dropping her I will pick her up from my way

while

returning back home.

Moreover

, it will save

your

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you

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time in commuting. I have planned all the weekend activities which not only include picnics but

also

shopping. I assure you, your daughter will not feel alone a my home.

Also

, I have my niece here, they both will be mixed up with each other and play together. In case there is any change in plan please let me know. Best regards Navdeep

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a clear main idea; the third paragraph could be more focused on a single aspect of the plans.

task achievement

Complete all aspects of the task; expand slightly on the timing that suits you besides mentioning the pickup time, for clarity.

lexical resource

Use a wide range of vocabulary to convey precise meanings and avoid repetition of words and phrases

grammatical range

Utilize a variety of complex sentence structures to demonstrate language flexibility and accuracy.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

143 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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