Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

During these days, judging
other's
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traditions and personalities based on clothing is a common phenomenon.
However
, I totally disagree with
this
situation and
this
essay will discuss
about
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my ideas with suitable solutions.
First
and foremost, it is impossible that clothing style can tell the detail of
people
's culture and character.
In addition
, the majority of
people
choose their dressing depending on the place, weather, and trend.As an example, the public would love to wear comfortable dresses in summer rather than heavy dressing styles because the weather is very hot. What is more, it is clear that employees have to wear their uniforms
instead
of their liking. On the one hand, the character is not the thing that can be easily known with physical appearances.
People
can find other's true
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based on their manners, mindset and skills. There is no doubt that Asian
people
have to western clothing
such
as suits and dresses according to a circumstance. Different cities have different traditions that have been created by their histories.
Therefore
, a choice of clothing is not able to judge the culture. To sum up, if clothing becomes the fact of judging others, the comments will be definitely wrong.
Although
dressing code is important in
this
society,
this
phenomenon would be thoughtless.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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