Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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were more simple in the past, nowadays, they have become so complex,

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. Many believe

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technology provides numerous advantages worldwide,

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statement. On the one hand, advocates of atomic

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may claim that it would give privileges for having a safer world.

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is because not all the countries across the globe seek peace, and actually, some of them strive for more power and war.

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powerful

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will bring a safer environment internationally to all people due to the fact that these

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hold those countries to initiate war - countries like North Korea and Iran to name a few.

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, many people believe that atomic defence equipment is harmful.

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of nuclear

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clearly known, which not only affects the environment but

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it harms human health directly.

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not any benefit to the world. An excellent example of these harms is Japan.

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, these

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are too dangerous to human existence as exploding only a few of them can lead to an irreversible disaster which might be

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of the planet. In my opinion, these cutting-edge facilities do not have any positive side to the world but only danger. In conclusion, as the primary reasons mentioned, despite the fact that many say nuclear bombs are helpful, these

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are accompanied by a significant threat to all people and our planet, so manufacturing of them should be stopped