You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter: · Explain what will be happening · Offer your apologies in advance · Invite him to join the celebration

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Dear Mr Jain, I am writing

this

letter to extend an invitation to you and your family for my graduation party scheduled for 26th

week.

To begin

with, I feel very delighted to inform you that I have completed my graduation degree with top grades on 19th Mar2022. In order to commemorate my achievement, I have organized a party in the garden area on 26th Mar. I have invited my peers to join the occasion. There are numerous events planned for the evening like gaming, live-music along with dinner and the celebration would

last

at midnight.

Furthermore

, I would

also

like to beg your pardon regarding the event timings. I tried to schedule the party during early evening hours ,

Correct word choice

but

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however

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the slots were unavailable.

In addition

, as it is a special occasion and there will be numerous college students, there will be noise.

Nevertheless

, I will ensure to keep the music low.

Lastly

, I would be grateful if you could manage your office timings and join the celebration. You have always been a role -model for me who has motivated me at every juncture of life to accomplish goals. I will be looking forward to a positive response. Yours sincerely, (Ms) Neha

Submitted by nehajaiswal4220 on Wed Mar 16 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant milestone
personal achievement
celebration
attendees
venue
advance apologies
inconvenience
noise level
parking arrangements
warm invitation
festivities
get to know
minimize disruption
considerate parking
neighborhood harmony

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