In the past, many people got married when they were very young, but today, many people do not get married until later. Why do you think they do this, and is it a good or a bad idea?
There was a trend in the
last
century to be in wedlock from an early age, nowadays it has become the opposite, the marriage starts at a late age. However
, I think that the main reason for this
tendency is the life
average. Although
, this
is a bad way to make a family without life
's experience and financial independence.
The first thing we need to understand is that every period has its individual differences connected with the environment. Second,
today 40-year-old person is a young guy, 50 years ago he would have been an old one. Finally
, medicine wasn't at a low level and it influences lifespan. For example
, Natalya Goncharova wife of the great Russian poet A. S. Pushkin described his teacher Mr Karamzin as a very old man, he was only 45 then
. Meanwhile, the ability to cure a lot of diseases appeared in the 20th century. The previous information confirms my point of view, our ancestors had to get married early to give their children a chance for a better life
.
On the other hand
, problems with medical care and the duration of life
are in the past. However
, there are new challenges in the 21st century to deal with. Doubtless, if you want family today you need to have practice and be able to earn enough. For example
, the data collected by Social Agency Ltd.shows that the main reasons for divorces in 2020 were money(37%) and inability to find compromise during the relationship(25%). I believe that the young ones need to get some skills in life
and to have good bank accounts before they start living together.
In conclusion, I think that the essay's questions have very good and straight answers, they are, on the one hand, the influence terms of life
surrounding in the past makes early ages' families. On the other hand
, we do not need to act the same way today.Submitted by interclass1982 on
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Be sure to address both parts of the prompt comprehensively: why people marry later and whether it's a good or bad idea.
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coherence cohesion
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There are several relevant points made to explain why people get married later in life.
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Examples given, while sometimes generalized, support the main points effectively.