you have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neghboorur. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbor to come

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Dear Mr Jason, Hope you are doing well. My name is Shima. We are four of family and we have moved into

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apartment for a week and we are your upstairs neighbour. I am a horse-riding tutor and my husband is the manager of an international company. I met you at the estate agency when I came to resign

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contract. My husband has been appointed as a chairman for a couple of weeks. As a matter of fact, on reflection, I have been planning to hold a gorgeous party and surprise him. The bottom line, I will be celebrating the dinner party on

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of February. It starts at 6 pm or thereabouts. I think it takes around 5 hours.

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, I have invited roundabout 30 people without their children. I am distressed that the noise will be irritating and disturb your peacefulness.

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, I do apologize for any irritating racket in advance.

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, I would like to have you over for

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gathering. I hope you can come and

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you can come at any time. With regards, Shima Dehdasht

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

187 words

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