Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

A few defend that people that become wealthy have achieved true

success

, while

others

argue the level of

success

is more connected to the difference

someone

makes to

others

. The purpose of

this

essay is to analyze both sides of

this

argument , and

then

I will give my opinion, which is that

success

is more related to contribution to

society

than to the amount of

money

someone

is able to accumulate. On the one hand, some believe that

money

is the main measure for

success

. One reason is that having much

money

is the dream of many.

For instance

, they think a huge amount of

money

will make them happy.

In addition

, when the

money

comes from effort and merit, it brings a rewarding feeling. Many famous people had to work hard,

such

as Neymar, who had to practice to become one of the best soccer players.

Therefore

, many would say he succeeded, considering he came from a poor family.

On the other hand

, there are

others

who think the impact on

society

influences

more

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how successful

someone

feels. Personal satisfaction and happiness increase when you do something good for

others

.

For example

, after teaching or helping

others

, that person might express gratitude in return, and there are hormones released that make you feel better.

Besides

, there are many priceless things in life,

such

as purpose. When you contribute to

society

by discovering a new medicine,

for example

, the number of people who will benefit and the feeling of mission accomplished might make you feel successful. In conclusion, I believe both sides have merits. On balance, in my

opinion

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how much

someone

contributes to

society

is more valuable than wealthy when measuring

success

.

This

is because it is my belief that if everyone aimed at doing something good for

others

,

money

would be just a consequence, as I feel that the world would be a better place.