Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree? You should write at least 250 words.
The character of famous people leaves a profound image on adolescents' minds and various means of media are playing a vital role in
this
area. In this
essay, I will discuss that celebrities' public action cultivates positive as well as
negative impressions on young ones' minds.
On the first
hand, the constructive media publicity of the public figure motivates teenagers to build their careers. The young generation does not only follow their role model but Correct word choice
other
also
try
to mimic their actions in their Correct subject-verb agreement
tries
real-life
by learning from their biography broadcasted by various channels. Correct your spelling
real life
For example
, the Indian cricketer, M. S. Dhoni, has inspired many youngsters by publishing his biography about his struggle and how he achieved success. Hence
, the creative coverage of media performs an important role in one's learning about their hero's life.
On the other hand
, the negative publicity of the famous person leaves a detrimental impact on their followers. Many reporters are following
film stars in their private parties and Wrong verb form
follow
then
releases
the after-party footage of them where they are observed either drinking or smoking publicly. To illustrate, the Indian actor, Shah Rukh Khan, has been spotted many times with an alcohol bottle in hand which has inspired many to consume the same. Correct subject-verb agreement
release
Thus
, such
an incident provokes young adults to get attracted to bad habits.
To conclude
, though the activities of the popular person can be inspirational for someone, it
can foster the wrong impression as well if it is not conveyed wisely. It is the onus of broadcasters to decide what to display and what not by considering the future of the young audience.Correct pronoun usage
they
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Task Response
Your essay provides a good discussion on both the positive and negative impact of media coverage of celebrities on children. Ensure to address the prompt fully by discussing the extent to which you agree with the statement. Consider providing a clear stance on the topic and supporting it throughout the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs discussing positive and negative impacts, and a concluding paragraph. To further enhance coherence and cohesion, make sure that your ideas flow logically from one point to the next. Use transitional phrases to guide the reader through your arguments smoothly.