Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

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Dear Adam, My teacher suggested that I write to you because I am looking for a penfriend. I

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wanted to know if you are interested in writing to me. I am Navneet Kaur, I am a graduate student from St. Lawrance

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in the business studies course.

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, I wanted to study

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, I joined

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apply

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Canadore

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for the French course. I really love to play basketball and football.

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, going for an evening walk

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doing yoga for some time during the day are my

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favourite activities. Meanwhile, I

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excellent cooking skills which I got from my mother. During the weekends, I spend time cooking delicious meals for my family and friends. I am really interested to know about your likes and dislikes. I am keenly interested to know about your hobbies that

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you to get relaxed in your free time. I will be waiting for your letter. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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task achievement

Try to elaborate a bit more on why you enjoy your hobbies or what specifically interests you in your studies; this will add more depth to your letter.

coherence cohesion

Ensure consistent tense use throughout your writing to maintain clarity.

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The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a penfriend, which creates a warm and inviting atmosphere.

coherence cohesion

The letter has clear paragraphs and a logical structure, effectively separating the introduction, your interests, and questions to the penfriend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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