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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these viese views and give your own opinion.

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In recent years, according to the development of sophisticated technology, many
people
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 tend to find the best
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 to
share
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 any
information
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 with citizens from all over the globe, even though scientific or freeway. Some
people
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 believe that sharing a piece of
information
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 through scientific research, business, and the academic world is a great action and truly pivotal rather than other freely step like orally speech, face-to-face discussion, and or texting through many kinds of platforms.
This
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 essay will argue that the
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 which was shared by the scientific
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 is crucial to overcome the fake
news
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 which some
people
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 called ‘hoax’. On the one hand, sharing
information
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 in three formal ways, as was previously stated, is really important for nowadays situation. There are three aspects that supported the statement, which are the importance of real
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, accurate
way
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 to get and
share
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 the
news
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 is necessary, and it is believable if we get
information
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 without any opinion or untruthful predictions. The more
people
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 use their brainchild to process any stuff through recognized steps, the more
people
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 will believe the
information
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 deeply. In fact, in
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 era, there are many researchers that are so aware of all of the things humans had done, so the
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 is truly crucial.
On the other hand
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, the
information
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 which is shared in fake ways like oral gossip, discussion in an informal meeting, and or texting through lots of platforms like Whatsapp, Instagram, and Twitter are
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 beneficial to humans who want to specifically know the truth. A lot of experts stated that the
way
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 is vain, for the reason that, sometimes
people
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 who shared the
information
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 will put some unreal
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 came from their point of view or perceptions, but
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, it is truly beneficial to get to know the secrets hidden by certain
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.
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, sometimes citizens in a certain country will not be truly aware of the
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 coming from the government, so they try to search for many secrets from others who probably know those specifically. In my point of view, if we are presently faced with modern technology that
people
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 can use for filtering any
news
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, it is no problem to
share
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 a lot of
information
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 through all kinds of resources, even those are real or fake, the most important thing is
people
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 recently understand how to get to know deeply about some stuff. But, it is better to
share
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information
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 in a formal
way
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 rather than informal. In conclusion, experiencing a formal
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 to
share
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such
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information
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 is possible.
Also
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, it’s never minded for
people
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 who are deeply curious about something to find
information
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 through many sources. Understanding how to filter
information
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 is better to prevent many causes impacted by the unreal
information
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.

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