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Although more and more people read the news on Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

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In
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 era of globalisation, lifestyle has changed a lot and
people
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 try to adjust to the varied situations. All these changes have made
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 world complicated.
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,
people
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 have various thoughts about many things
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 as some groups think newspapers are the major source of information but
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, others think that it is not.
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, I disagree
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 statement since in
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 technical era majority of the
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 has been displayed through mobiles, laptops, televisions, and so on.
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 essay delves into the matter in detail to come to a logical conclusion.
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 with, the
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 who have a thought that newspaper is the main source of information is probably because they may be unacknowledged or have not experienced all parts of the Internet where they can get
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 as well within no time.
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, no sooner does an important thing happen than it will come
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 on the Internet and Television than in any kind of newspaper, which is quite useful in certain emergency situations.
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, groups that contradict
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 statement are those who have used the Internet in all aspects and take advantage of it.
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, I agree that other technical sources are handier than newspapers.
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, in paper-based
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,
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 have only the option to read, whereas, in other social media platforms various types of videos can be seen and
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 who cannot read and write find it useful. To put it in a nutshell, the statement of the newspaper gives the majority of
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 has to disagree since a plethora of other insources is available.
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