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volunteer work organised by middle schools brings more benefits than problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#volunteer #work #middle #schools
Students
 nowadays are encouraged to
paticipate
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participate
into
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the
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community
volunteer
work
 more often. Even their
school
 organise
such
kind
 of activities to enable them to involve
into
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 the local community. I personally believe that
this
 brings more benefits than problems. Improving the practical skills of
youngster
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 that
further
 might enrich their life experience
as well as a crime rate reduction
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, as well as a crime rate reduction,
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 are the main benefits.
Firstly
, it is possible that
volunteer
work
 in
community
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add
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 on life skills for those middle
school
students
 who lack
of
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adequate experience.
For instance
,
students
 may be access to fixing broken tools for the elderly, selling tickets for a botanical garden.
Hence
, they may be able to master more knowledge they can't learn from books when they just sit in the classroom.
Thus
, we believe that
volunteer
work
 organised by the
school
 system is of great benefit for
students
.
Secondly
,
students
those
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who
fulfill
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volunteer
work
 frequently tend to be
kind
, generous, compassionate, which may contribute to
establish
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peer
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peers
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.
For example
, some
students
 may enlarge their circle of friends when they doing
volunteer
work
 with their
classmate
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classmates
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 which
further
 might build their healthy mental status.
Therefore
, those
students
 are possible to have
a
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good character and get far away from any offensive
behaviors
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. I definitely support that middle
schools
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students
 should do more
volunteer
work
 because
this
 lead to a lower crime rate in society. In conclusion, the advantages of
volunteer
work
 organised by the
school
 system override its disadvantages. Parents and teachers should encourage young
students
 to do more
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this
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kind
 of activities
instead
 of only
studing
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studying
 in the classroom. Hopefully, we will see more of
this
kind
 of innovation of education.
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