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volunteer work organised by middle schools brings more benefits than problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#volunteer #work #middle #schools
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Students
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 nowadays are encouraged to
paticipate
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participate
into
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the
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community
volunteer
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work
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 more often. Even their
school
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 organise
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kind
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 of activities to enable them to involve
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 the local community. I personally believe that
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 brings more benefits than problems. Improving the practical skills of
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 that
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 might enrich their life experience
as well as a crime rate reduction
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, as well as a crime rate reduction,
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 are the main benefits.
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, it is possible that
volunteer
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work
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community
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 on life skills for those middle
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students
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 who lack
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adequate experience.
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,
students
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 may be access to fixing broken tools for the elderly, selling tickets for a botanical garden.
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, they may be able to master more knowledge they can't learn from books when they just sit in the classroom.
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, we believe that
volunteer
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work
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 organised by the
school
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 system is of great benefit for
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.
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,
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those
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who
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volunteer
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work
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 frequently tend to be
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, generous, compassionate, which may contribute to
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peer
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.
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, some
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 may enlarge their circle of friends when they doing
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work
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 with their
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 which
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 might build their healthy mental status.
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, those
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 are possible to have
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good character and get far away from any offensive
behaviors
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. I definitely support that middle
schools
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students
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 should do more
volunteer
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work
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 because
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 lead to a lower crime rate in society. In conclusion, the advantages of
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work
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 organised by the
school
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 system override its disadvantages. Parents and teachers should encourage young
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 to do more
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this
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kind
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 of activities
instead
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 of only
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studying
 in the classroom. Hopefully, we will see more of
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kind
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 of innovation of education.
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