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People today can use the internet to learn about lives and cultures in other countries, so it is not necessary to travel anymore. Do you agree?

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Nowadays, the
internet
 is very useful, almost everyone in the world uses the
internet
, we can use the
internet
 to search the place or learn about other country's cultures, but I disagree with
this
 opinion because humans need to be active,
people
 need to meet
people
. There are two reasons that I do not agree with
this
 opinion.
First
 of all, I think it is not the same when we go to travel and just search on the
internet
,
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 when you just search on the
internet
, you can just look at some pictures, even the picture is faint, and on the
internet
 not everything is true. On the
internet
 someone who posted the photo on the
internet
 will say, you must come here it is very beautiful…… which means it is definitely two different things going to the place and just looking at the photo on the
internet
.
In addition
, travelling, getting to know new places, meeting the culture of other country and getting to know new peoples is very important in our life.
Second
, meeting new places or new
people
 can give more knowledge or experience, and it makes meaningful memories, and you can make many good friends when you go to new places and many delicious foods.
In addition
, it is way better when you go outside than staying at home. In conclusion, I think travelling is necessary, and
people
 always need to exercise.
As a result
, I believe that travelling is way better than staying at home and just searching on the
internet
.
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