People have different opinions on how they should spend their money. While some people believe that we should spend our money to enjoy life, other argue that we should save it for the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many

people

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think that the

money

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which they earn should be spent to enjoy

life

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while others claim that it should be saved for the later days. I personally agree that both of these views have

its

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own

benifits

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benefits

. On the one hand, the option to

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money

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to enjoy

life

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is attractive to many

people

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for

some

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several reasons.

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and foremost, everyone is worth

to enjoy

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enjoying

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the

money

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they earn. The purpose

that

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is that

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we work hard

for

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apply

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every single month and

in

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the

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result, they could

recieve

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receive

their income.

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, spending

money

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help

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us have a comfortable

life

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.

Money

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support

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us

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to do

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do

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doing

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anything we want.

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, we can purchase a cleaning robot which

help

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people

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be take

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take

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responsibility

to

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for

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the housework.

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, we can travel to many

manificent

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magnificent

places in order to enjoy

life

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. It is not only to wind down after many

stressfull

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stressful

day

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days

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but

also

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to broaden our horizons.

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, there are a variety of reasons why saving

money

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for the future is suggested by many

people

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.

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,

that is

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the essential way to ensure our

life

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quality. Most

peope

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people

feel more secure when they have

money

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accumulated for

emercency

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emergency

,

accident

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accidents

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for instance

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.

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, we could not do any

ambitous

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ambitious

dreams without saving

money

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. More specifically, to have

sufficent

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sufficient

finance to purchase a house, obviously, we have to own

the

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tremendous amount of

money

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. In fact, the

possitive

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positive

way to do

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to save our salary for years. In conclusion, it seems evident that both views of using

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money

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the money

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for a comfortable

life

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and

accumulate

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accumulating

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it for later days have

its

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their

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own advantages. I believe that we should enjoy our

life

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in

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within

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certain

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a certain

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limit

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limits

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and save

the

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apply

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money

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for the future days.