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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there for this problem?

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In the past century, the environment has surfaced many changes.Global warming is the biggest problem for the effect on the environment.There are several reasons for
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 situation. Both the causes and measures are elaborated
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. The foremost reason for environmental harm is greenhouse gas.To explain it, nowadays we all are becoming dependent on non-renewable resources.
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, petrol is the most consumed fuel. These greenhouse gases generate carbon dioxide (co2). The ozone layer broke by Co2, which ozone protects us from the UV rays of the sun. The
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 is deforestation.To explicate it, flora consumed oxygen and generate carbon dioxide, which gives us clean oxygen.But in recent times trees are destroyed by humans and the CO2 is increasing.
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 global warming is creating various harmful problems in our life.
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, some primitive steps can be taken to overcome
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 issue. The best solution for global warming is forestation.
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, from every house one person can plant the greenery and authority can zone out the land of the plantation.
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 , the government can encourage people to use renewable and non-polluting energy sources.like electricity can generate windmills of solar energy.
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 can be used for vehicles. To sup up, it is the fact that the environments are facing different types of problems from human-like the greenhouse effect, deforestation.
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, it can be measured by individuals as well as the government by planting flora and consuming renewable resources.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climate change
  • Earth's atmosphere
  • Carbon dioxide
  • Methane
  • Nitrous oxide
  • Emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy efficiency
  • Afforestation
  • Carbon footprint
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