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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second hand clothing amongst the younger generation.1. Why is this happening? 2. Do you think its a positive or negative development?

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From certain years, the youths are more akin to buying
second
 hand or rather reconditioned clothes. The reason behind
this
 new trend of buying it amongst the youth is their availability in the market as dirt cheap commodities as compared to brand new attire.In my opinion,
this
 trend amongst the youth is definitely a positive step as it helps them to afford to buy the trendy regalia at very throwaway prices . Clothing markest have become so costly as normal people are getting difficulty purchasing them. Only the wealthy are getting benefits.
This
 has really created distress in a majority of people. Not only that all these
second
 hands or rather reconditioned attire are as good and attractive as the new ones and because they are in the market everywhere at very crappy prices and easily available too. I believe
this
second
-hand marketing has many positive sides as it helps them to afford at a very reasonable cost.
Moreover
, those garbs are looking almost the same as the brand new clothes and equally sturdy and very very useful to be used as the new fashionable dresses so it can attract the youths of both the socio-economic status equally
thus
 no inhibitions to buy
such
 regalia or rather and embodiment of the new current fashions. In conclusion, so
this
 new trend of buying
second
-hand clothing is definitely a positive attitude amongst the youth of both socioeconomic statuses. Because
this
 is
also
 looking as good as the new one and at very very cheap prices.
Moreover
, they always have been available in almost mod looking designs and are equally cheap.
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