Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.
There are some benefits to establishing as much as great material in scientific study, commerce and the academic globe to some extent.
while
I would believe that crucial information in part of field should be secret of every company.
On the one hand, nowadays, people easier
access gain Add a missing verb
have easier
the
plethora Correct article usage
a
Change preposition
of generally
generally
knowledge in terms of science, Change the word
general
business
and education via Correct article usage
the internet
internet
, Capitalize word
Internet
book
... which are so useful for Fix the agreement mistake
books
human
to study and find a solution. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
For example
, when the covid-19
pandemic Correct your spelling
COVID-19
spreads
worldwide , WHO quickly shared disastrous disease news Wrong verb form
spread
to
the public leading to the population having a range of precautionary measures and reducing severe problems. Change preposition
with
In addition
, individuals can save plenty of time for research and look for what they want to seek , this
means they will have more time to innovate and create new ideas and keep in step with globalization .
On the other hand
, people increasingly compete in a variety of fields in science, business
and academy that
they are more careful as much as vital data in their own which they invest money and resources on . Correct word choice
apply
Subsequently
, they will reach wonderful achievements or create profit in their business
. Furthermore
, business
protects their research from vitals who take advantage of and duplicate their products . For instance
, many unknown companies copied Nike shoes and sold them on the market at an inexpensive price that effected negatively to Nike`s prestige.
In conclusion, people's life is easier with modern technology pieces of information however
private and valuable information should be respected by their owners until they introduce it to the public.Submitted by thuy.hong.cyc on
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task response
You have presented arguments for both sides of the topic, which is good. However, ensure that all points are clearly developed and explained.
coherence cohesion
Improve the structure of your essay by ensuring a clear introduction, body paragraphs with supporting points, and a conclusion summarizing your arguments.