Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?

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It can not be denied that over recent years the popularity of fast

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had increased rapidly. Some

people

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say that the increase of fast

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trend

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seems to be a good

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, in my opinion, I believe that it seems to be a negative

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more than a positive

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. In the following paragraph, my opinions will be discussed more in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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, when we refer to fast

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, the

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type of

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that is

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usually be reminded of is junk

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. As we all know, junk

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is processed

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. It includes additive, preservative and

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msg which might result to bad health in our long term life.

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people

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taking junk

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usually had a higher chance to have a result of high blood pressure, cholesterol or even cancer compared to

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eating clean

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, fast

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usually causes

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to gain weight as it is salty and is full of unhealthy fats.

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, the cleanliness and quality of fast

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. When we are able to cook on our own, we will keep our

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clean and fresh as much as possible.

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fast

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restaurants do not usually control the cleanliness and quality of their

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, in Thailand, fresh

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is in hot weather without ice to keep it chill. Many

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got diarrhoea from taking

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rotten

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, there might be mice or cockroaches in these

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restaurants which is really unhealthy for a person to eat as it might cause

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poisoning to the consumer. In conclusion,

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fast

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is fast, delicious and cheap, when we compare it to our health in both the short term and long term, taking clean

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that might take a longer time on your break or cost a little more would

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a better life in the future.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Obesity epidemic
Processed foods
Nutritional value
Chronic diseases
Cultural homogenization
Lifestyle changes
Economic impact
Job creation
Environmental degradation
Sustainability
Dietary habits
Consumerism
Mass production
Public health
Health-conscious

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