Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Railways

and

roads

both are an essential part of the world.Nowadays it is argued that

authorities

should invest money in

railways

insted

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instead

of

roads

.some people believe that

government

should spend

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on

railways

instead

of

roads

.To my mind,

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think

this

is a negative trend and will share the information with

relavent

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relevant

examples. Generally speaking,there

are

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a wide range of reasons

that

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why

roads

are vital in everyday life?

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there any important

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?

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there are.

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roads

are

also

crucial

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thing to develop

with

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time

to

time

.

Firstly

if the road

is not repair

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does not repair

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properly so that any

time

could be

accident

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.

Moreover

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road will be

high

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qualified because it would be

safety

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.

Secondly

,if any

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want

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to

sold

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his buildings

thay

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they

that

have to repair his

roads

because if they do not repair his area it will be law his building price.

However

,it must be said there are several arguments to the contrary trans are the most commuting

transport

one place to another place.

firstly

while people

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train daily which is law

transport

fee.

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fee

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But

also

it will help to save extra money.Despite

this

other side as

this

is

a public

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public transport

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transport

so

government

should keep mind that maintenance for internal as well as external.As it is public

transport

and it

is use

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for daily so if

authorities

do not keep proper maintenance they will get bad impact from the public. The result of

this

is that

railways

have to

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more than Compare to

roads

. If the

government

maintaine

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maintained

maintains

maintain

road side

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roadside

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it will give benefit years to years as well as

authorities

get proper profit long

time

. In conclusion, it must be said that

government

should keep on eye

for

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roads

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road

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maitenance

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maintenance

because it

relate

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with

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many

orher

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other

side

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. If

authorities

keep on eye

roads

they will get public pray and

better

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a better

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economy.