Each culture is unique To what extent do you agree in disagree?

In today's globalized world where all
people
to some extent resemble one another the thing which makes the difference is
culture
. Speaking about
culture
in
Uzbekistan
, it is rather diverse. Rich history, with outstanding persons
such
as Beruni, Mukanna, and Amir Temur; national meals,
such
as palov and sumalak, that attract
people
from all over the globe; incredible customs and traditions.
However
, do these things make Uzbek
culture
unique? Partly. Each
country
in the world has its own
culture
, holidays and traditions and in each one they are magnificent. But what really distinguishes Uzbek
culture
from others is its
people
. Here,
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people
of more than 250 nationalities live together in love and peace. When a person visits the
country
he or she has an excellent opportunity to explore these cultures. So, by visiting only one small
country
in the middle
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asia
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, there is a chance to discover the whole world. Apart from
this
,
people
in
Uzbekistan
are well-known for their hospitality. For some
reasons
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, I firmly believe because of the challenges
people
have been facing throughout
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history, culturally Uzbek
people
are willing to give more love to other
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human beings
, regardless of how
this
love is expressed- in the form of hugs and
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handshake or the share of shelter and food. When a person goes
in
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Uzbekistan
even today, when
people
generally are afraid of trusting
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each other, he or she can be sure that if anything goes wrong, there are always those, who will give a helping hand because of only good intentions. Undoubtedly, every
country
is unique by its customs, national meal and holidays, but
Uzbekistan
, apart from
this
has incredible national diversity and hospitality, and these things can make
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to
this
country
unforgettable.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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