It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that
Correct your spelling
learning
leaning
how to protect the environment is as essential as that of how to read and write. Correct your spelling
learning
However
, I disagree with this
assertion as once kids
learn literacy, reading and writing have various benefits including reading an article about environmental protection themselves.
Firstly
, If some kids
learn to read and wright
at an early age, they can earn a good grade from a class. As they live in a competitive society, it is difficult to gain an extraordinary grade among children who are rivals. Not only can reading skills and writing skills enhance patience and knowledge, but Correct your spelling
write
it
may Correct pronoun usage
they
also
brings
about better grades. Change the verb form
bring
For example
, a recent media in Korea reports that a child who learned literacy before the 6 years old tend to earn 30% higher grades than other kids
who learned to read and write after that age. Hence
, if children be
literate earlier than others, they can easily become knowledgeable since they can read more books that help them to become wise.
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are
Secondly
, students who are taught to read and write can have more chances to learn other languages efficiently which is beneficial to get a better job in the future. Because when kids
learn multi languages
at the same time, they easily become confused. Add a hyphen
multi-languages
Therefore
, after they finish master
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mastering
the
mother tongue, it is way easy to learn Change the word
their
other language
. What is more, due to globalization, a significant number of multinational companies are willing to recruit candidates who are multi-lingual. In Change the wording
another language
other languages
this
regard, it is reasonable to point out that learning literacy is a substantial advantage for kids
.
In conclusion, reading and writing skills are more crucial to win in a competition at school than leaning
the way to protect Correct your spelling
learning
environment
. Add an article
the environment
Furthermore
, I strongly believe that if children can read and write, they can read an article about environmental issues by themselves.Submitted by hiasince38 on
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