It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that
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leaning
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how to protect the environment is as essential as that of how to read and write.
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, I disagree with
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assertion as once
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learn literacy, reading and writing have various benefits including reading an article about environmental protection themselves.
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, If some
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learn to read and
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at an early age, they can earn a good grade from a class. As they live in a competitive society, it is difficult to gain an extraordinary grade among children who are rivals. Not only can reading skills and writing skills enhance patience and knowledge, but
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about better grades.
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, a recent media in Korea reports that a child who learned literacy before the 6 years old tend to earn 30% higher grades than other
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who learned to read and write after that age.
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, if children
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literate earlier than others, they can easily become knowledgeable since they can read more books that help them to become wise.
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, students who are taught to read and write can have more chances to learn other languages efficiently which is beneficial to get a better job in the future. Because when
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at the same time, they easily become confused.
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, after they finish
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the
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mother tongue, it is way easy to learn
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. What is more, due to globalization, a significant number of multinational companies are willing to recruit candidates who are multi-lingual. In
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regard, it is reasonable to point out that learning literacy is a substantial advantage for
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. In conclusion, reading and writing skills are more crucial to win in a competition at school than
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the way to protect
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, I strongly believe that if children can read and write, they can read an article about environmental issues by themselves.
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