An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Nowadays, the number of qualified workers moving from their poor

countries

to developed

countries

is constantly rising.

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essay will

first

analise

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the two main causes of the mentioned problem,

then

it will discuss two possible solutions to

this

matter.

First

of all, professionals leave their

country

to earn a better salary and

work

in better jobs conditions. They

also

might want to improve their family's quality of life. Usually in their

country

of

origin

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they are working a lot to get a low salary, whereas in a developed

country

they will be paid out the way more.

This

is what is happening,

for instance

, with siran professionals. Siria was a wealthy

country

and developed, but after the war broke out waves of professionals were forced to leave their

country

and come to Europe. By moving to a developed

country

, professional workers will

also

have the opportunity to

work

in better jobs conditions and access to a well-equipped workplace.

For example

, if a doctor from Africa moves to New York, he will find modern hospitals with

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advanced technology and improved facilities.

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will lead to

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professional growth

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because employees will get the chance to

work

in a modern and stimulating working environment. It is possible to point out two solutions to

this

problem. On the one hand, local governments might try to fix

this

situation by investing more

money

to improve

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economy.

However

,

this

solution might be difficult to implement because it requires a lot of

money

, which is hard to find for a poor county. In my opinion, the best way to deal with

this

situation is to let

this people

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migrate towards developed

countries

to get equal opportunities. It is not fair to prevent them from seeking

for

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a better future for

them

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and their families. To conclude, more and more professional workers are moving from poorer

countries

to

work

in developed

countries

due to their need

of

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money

and desire to improve their job conditions. Even though

this

situation might

be fix

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by investing more

money

in poorer

countries

to develop

local

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economy, the best way to deal with

this

matter is to let it be.