An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Nowadays, the number of qualified workers moving from their poor

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to developed

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is constantly rising.

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the two main causes of the mentioned problem,

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it will discuss two possible solutions to

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of all, professionals leave their

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to earn a better salary and

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in better jobs conditions. They

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might want to improve their family's quality of life. Usually in their

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they are working a lot to get a low salary, whereas in a developed

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they will be paid out the way more.

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is what is happening,

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, with siran professionals. Siria was a wealthy

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and developed, but after the war broke out waves of professionals were forced to leave their

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and come to Europe. By moving to a developed

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, professional workers will

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have the opportunity to

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in better jobs conditions and access to a well-equipped workplace.

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, if a doctor from Africa moves to New York, he will find modern hospitals with

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advanced technology and improved facilities.

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will lead to

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professional growth

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because employees will get the chance to

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in a modern and stimulating working environment. It is possible to point out two solutions to

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problem. On the one hand, local governments might try to fix

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situation by investing more

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to improve

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economy.

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,

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solution might be difficult to implement because it requires a lot of

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, which is hard to find for a poor county. In my opinion, the best way to deal with

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situation is to let

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this people

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migrate towards developed

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to get equal opportunities. It is not fair to prevent them from seeking

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a better future for

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and their families. To conclude, more and more professional workers are moving from poorer

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to

work

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in developed

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due to their need

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money

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and desire to improve their job conditions. Even though

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situation might

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by investing more

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in poorer

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to develop

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economy, the best way to deal with

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matter is to let it be.