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The bar charts below show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000.

The bar charts below show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000.
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the bar charts
giving
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 information about the rating of rain in warm desert grassland for both
of
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apply
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the
year
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years
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 1980 and 2000.
overall
,
rain
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the rain
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 average across two years
it
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apply
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was
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a significant
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significant
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 variation. there was both of decreasing and increasing in all months of the term. first of all, the shower pattern
exhibit
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 diversity in order to
foremest
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foremost
 paragraph; that was sharply rose around 340
mm
 in March in 1980.
while
follow
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 to fall down dramatically through 4 months until January about 160
mm
.
then
, percentages changed from April up to December by slightly grew and stood axpermitaly 260
mm
at the end
 of
this
 breadth. in 2000, there was instability growth throughout all months. In July,August and November, the rating of rain
steady
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 peak which
stand
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 on 53
mm
. as same
as
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, compared to January, May and June
were
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also similarly soared
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also
similarly
 soar to 51
mm
. after that, the
estimate
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 trend declined
on
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to
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 49
mm
 which was
same
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the same
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 average to September.
At the end
 of
second
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 span relating to 2000; that merely shown was
distinction
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a distinction
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 direction in February to 40
mm
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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