In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people argue that shops,

schools

,

offices

and homes should be located

in particular

areas and separated from each other. While there are some advantages to

this

proposal, I maintain that the drawbacks are more significant.

On the other hand

, there are tremendous benefits from locating

schools

far away from shop malls or even different other buildings.

Firstly

the local authorities can easily control the city.

Secondly

, city dwellers can avoid the traffic jams at rush hour due to the purpose of each space.

As a result

, they can speed up their journey time. On the one hand, there is a major drawback when these buildings

such

as shops,

offices

have been built in

such

specific places. Some people find that inconvenient to experience

this

idea. The modern city is believed to contain as many convenient things as possible for living. In small research at HCM university of education, there are over 70% of people are seemed to be more interested in a diverse area that involves

schools

, shopping malls, homes and

offices

. The reason for

this

trend is

that is

effortless for them to get to these places because of their short distance. In conclusion,

although

this

plan might poss some benefits, it seems to me that the disadvantages of locating shops,

schools

, homes and

offices

far away from each other are more profound than the advantages.