In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people think that the internet and the resources of the digital world are developing rapidly because there are educational websites, programmes and useful tools

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as AI;

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, there is no need for instructors to provide education and teach. I fully disagree with

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statement, and in

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essay, I will discuss the

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reasons

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why. Education is crucial and essential in individuals' lives, so it is very important that it

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taught by a professional who has a degree. There are many reasons why

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is the case;

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, educators possess experience in the field they teach,

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as engineering, human medicine and poetry.

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, many academic sites may have technical issues,

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, slow loading, broken links and the need to refresh and update them.

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, some platforms may be outdated;

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, they may not open on certain devices or browsers.

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, they may offer old data

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not beneficial anymore.

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, lecturers have

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influence and impact on seniors and juniors and can help students enhance their soft skills,

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, communication, time management, teamwork and critical thinking.

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, one of the many advantages of instructors is that they can help you build your network and can volunteer to guide you and assist you

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a job by giving you a recommendation letter.

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, mentors are important to our society and cannot be replaced by artificial intelligence or any kind of modern method, since they have more knowledge and have worked in real life before.

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task response

You take a clear view and give reasons. To raise band use more balance: add a short counter view and then say why your view is still right.

coherence

Make each paragraph about one main idea. Use easy linking words (first, then, also, but, so). Shorter sentences help.

strength

Clear stance and easy flow of ideas.

strength

Good use of linking words like Moreover and To conclude.

strength

Examples show why teachers matter (skills, letters, guidance).

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

253 words

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