n the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Earlier students did their degree and higher studies from their parent country but now they are getting more offers from aboard.
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trend from my perspective. To embark on the good aspect of migrating abroad for graduation and post-graduation, scholars will get a chance to explore new atmospheres, cultures and opportunities. When graduates migrate,they will get an opportunity to mingle with different parts of the world.
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, one of my cousins went to the UK for doing an MBA and retired after completing his education. In my
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, he changed in a pretty way
such
as the way of thinking , maintaining relationships, the way he takes care of himself etc. not only him I have so many examples around me for
this
. According to me, I felt it's good to migrate abroad either temporary or permanent, and it will help to make a person better. On the other side, so many people immigrating abroad in the name of learning
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will stay there
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permanently and the parent country loses their human resources.
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they hardly return to their native places . It will affect their relations.
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, In my family , one of my
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brother
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went to Europe for his doctorate degree ten years before.
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he visited home hardly 4 times.my husband and kids do not aware of him.
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that relationship will get faded away. If we want to gain something we have to lose some other thing. For
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this
craking in our relationship is the major disadvantage of
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fact. To conclude, moving forward to other country have equal advantages and disadvantages and the weightage will depend upon the people. Migration will make a person better and
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the same time it affects relationships and reduces human resources
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