n the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Earlier students did their degree and higher studies from their parent country but now they are getting more offers from aboard.
This
essay will elaborate on both positive and negative aspects of this
trend from my perspective.
To embark on the good aspect of migrating abroad for graduation and post-graduation, scholars will get a chance to explore new atmospheres, cultures and opportunities. When graduates migrate,they will get an opportunity to mingle with different parts of the world. For instance
, one of my cousins went to the UK for doing an MBA and retired after completing his education. In my perspect
, he changed in a pretty way Correct your spelling
perspective
such
as the way of thinking , maintaining relationships, the way he takes care of himself etc. not only him I have so many examples around me for this
. According to me, I felt it's good to migrate abroad either temporary or permanent, and it will help to make a person better.
On the other side, so many people immigrating abroad in the name of learning,
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for
permanently and the parent country loses their human resources. Change preposition
apply
Then
they hardly return to their native places . It will affect their relations. For example
, In my family , one of my cousin
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cousin's
brother
went to Europe for his doctorate degree ten years before. Change to a plural noun
brothers
Afterthat
he visited home hardly 4 times.my husband and kids do not aware of him. Correct your spelling
After that
Eventually
that relationship will get faded away. If we want to gain something we have to lose some other thing. For Add a comma
,Eventually
me
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,me
this
craking in our relationship is the major disadvantage of this
fact.
To conclude, moving forward to other country have equal advantages and disadvantages and the weightage will depend upon the people. Migration will make a person better and in
the same time it affects relationships and reduces human resourcesChange preposition
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite